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[Napped]

Horrible, this is just a cringe manifested Roblox entry that no one would like to see, it barely consists of 25 frames and should be blammed.

CustardCreations responds:

stay off the internet for bit. k?

[BlockClock Smoking on gems]

No audio apart from a loud "THE END"
The animation is very lazy
No background
Light years aren't a measure of time but a measure of distance.

Improve EVERYTHING

BattleBlockClock responds:

Hey this is my first flash movie so be a little nice plus its clockday.

[Stairs]

This made me question life in a very weird but interesting way.

Keep up the good work?

HarrisonWyrick responds:

yessir! Happy to help :^)

[Goku and Krillin go to the movies]

Very abysmal.

If the animation would of went a little longer, with more expressive faces and a change of camera, it would've got around 3 stars.

The joke on here was so so so so abysmal and childish. "What's kissing?" really? Come on, do something better than this.

Zeno-Sensie responds:

You're coming into this video without a frame of reference. In the official anime, Goku doesn't know what kissing is. This is the joke.

[Kirby calls out Mario (Animatic)]

The voice acting is obnoxiously loud annoying, so loud and annoying I couldn't get through the first 2 minutes of it.

The animation was lacking, it just felt like a bunch of pictures being put out very slowly instead of a cartoon universe.

The script was also lacking, it took them more than a minute to say "you made a new game, Super Mario Odyssey, riiiiight?" and Mario replying with that Kirby also made a recent game.

It shows a little potential but you have to check on pretty much everything to make sure that it intrigues your audience.

Evy-Devy responds:

This isn't really meant to be an animation. I already said so in the description but this is meant to be an animatic, not an animation. Doing animation would not only make this simple video take MUCH longer but also demotivate me while making it. I can understand your frustration though so I changed the title to let people know right away it's not meant to be fluid. (Which is why there's little lip syncing.)

As for the voice acting, if it's too loud, just turn the volume down. But I know that the background music and voice acting is a bit loud. I did raise the voice acting a bit to not be drowned in the background music but I'm still experimenting with sound so I think I'll be lowering the sound a bit from now on.

As for Kirby talking slow, I did think it was a bit slow too but it fits Kirby's character since he is very young.

[Luigi's Confession]

I know, I know. This is a 9 year old post but I would like to put my intake on the video.

The text should've been there for 2-3 seconds longer, I understood everything but not everyone has the same level of reading.

Luigi has a star powerup and dies by a Goomba? I do not understand this.

The animation was decent, especially the Luigi bringing out his Super-Saiyan out.
The sound was good, some to loud than the other parts.

It didn't make me laugh much but it was intriguing, but with the cons of the video, i'll give it a 3.

hrechkaness responds:

Not a very inspired critique. The last portion is the only part I consider important.

[The Handymen - The Call]

I really enjoyed it! Do not understand the low reviews, it made me laugh and gave me a Rick and Morty and Regular Show vibe, although like you said the audio could've been better but it didn't ruin my experience of watching the video.

FlumpyTripod responds:

Thanks.

[Goofy's Confession - A Christmas Tale]

The animation is very fluid, the lip syncing had everything from the words to the sighs. Dark Comedy is one of favorite things to watch, you managed to not make it offensive without a 9/11 joke, the target audience is reasonable as you do not see any blood or gore. Although the animation could've been longer.

Good shit, man!

FlumpyTripod responds:

Thank you very much.